Homework due Nov. 14th
Part 1 are the activities done in TownSend Press. This week, you have been assigned chapter 9. You must score a minimum of 50% in the multiple choice activities, for it to be considered complete. If your grade is less than 50%, you can do it again. Please remember that as an instructor I can see how much time you spend on each activity. The activities are due on Mondays at 9:00am. For this week, complete the following activities from chapter 9:
• Vocabulary in Context
• Matching Words with Definitions
• Sentence Check 1
• Sentence Check 2
• Final Check
Part 2 is a writing assignment where you will include at least 3 of the new vocabulary words from chapter 9. You can also select words from chapter 12 if needed. Your paragraph should be at least five sentences long. Pay attention to grammar, punctuation, and overall clarity. At the bottom of your paragraph, please tell me which 3 words you used.
Role – Manufacturer/producer of a product of your choice
Audience – Amazon shoppers
Format – Product description
Topic – Write a product description that can be posted on Amazon, so people know what the product is and how it works before they buy it.
From: Manufacturer
ReplyDeleteTo : Amazon Shoppers
Hi, to all my dearest customers, I am selling my electronic items on this platform from a long time. We have sold ample of electronics. To prolong my business, I am going to alter some new product with the old ones. I assure you that the electronic I have launched works 5 times faster and it's easy to clean after use. You can try the product and return it and get full refund if it's not a pretense. I am optimistic about the reviews and guarantee there won't be any remorse.
Words: Ample, prolong, alter, pretense, optimistic, remorse - TASNEEM
Homework Due Nov 14 Student: Tasneem
DeleteTownSend Press 38/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: You have a verb tense error at the beginning. You wrote “I am selling… for a long time”. When you started something in the past and it continues to the present, you can use the present perfect. In this case, it should be “I have been selling…”. As for vocabulary, the words “ample” and “pretense” were not used clearly. The rest look good! Total: 88 %
product description from the manufacturer:
ReplyDeleteamazon customers can buy this air bed and inflate it with the cord. This alters its shape. It can be carried anywhere as it can be folded and does not require ample space. Proper use prolongs the product life. It is anti allergic with embeded air pockets. It can be used in pools as it doesnot submerge in water.
(alter, ample, prolong, em-bedded, sub-merged)
swetha
Homework Due Nov 14 Student: Swetha
DeleteTownSend Press 48/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Hey Swetha! Make sure to start your sentences with a capital letter please. All vocabulary words from chapter 9 and 12 were used correctly. Awesome work!! Total: 98 %
Producer Description
ReplyDeleteAmazon shoppers, if you want memorable photos, this selfie stick has a convenient size to carry, rain resistant material, retractable and LED light for night photos, plus it has a ample range of colors and our guarantee prolong for years. If you have any alter when using the product and you are not satisfied with our product, you can be optimistic because we will give you a full refund, and it will not be a chronic of steps for this process. Do not remorse!
words: ample, prolong, alter, optimistic, chronic, remorse.
student: yuly
Homework Due Nov 14 Student: Yuly
DeleteTownSend Press 50/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 6/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 9/10
Comments: Hey Yuly, please make sure to meet with 5 sentence minimum. As for vocabulary, you need to revise how to use “alter”, “chronic” and “remorse”. You also have a few errors in the first sentence. Some of the verbs needed for the list are wrong or missing. For example you said it “ha a convenient size”. It should be “is” instead of “has”. Total: 95 %
Hey users/followers.
ReplyDeleteToday we have a good news for you. Yes you have heard it right today is the launch day as all events happened in chronological order. We are introducing our newly designed washing machine which has apmle space for big laundaries . Its stain removing brushes are best for chronic stains. Its new technology is organised for less energy consumption and the electricity bills you get you won"t remorse buying it. Any kind of alteration is cost effective during its prolong usage and we never pretense. So what are you waiting for don"t refrain yourself from buying this amazing product. We wellcome your honest and blunt reviews and i am optimist that we get best reviews.
Thank you.
Words (ample, chronic, remorse, alteration, prolong, pretense, refrain, blunt, optimist)
FARHANA
Homework Due Nov 14 Student: Farhana
DeleteTownSend Press 45/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Hey Farhana! I like how you always challenge yourself to use lots of the new vocabulary words! One of the words you did not use properly today was “remorse”. This word can only be used as a noun. You had it as a verb. The only other word you did not use correctly was “pretense”. Total: 95%
Hi Amazon Customers.
ReplyDeleteWe are America's largest manufacturer for towels. we have ample verities of towels, you can order chronologically, and we can assure you that you do not remorse your decision to order from us. we are very chronic in this business from decades and never pretense. you can alter the order with in 7 days after receiving and we don't prolong to exchange or refund. we are very optimistic about our product. Even customers blunt review gets discount, which guide us to improve in our service and product
word used: ample, chronologically, pretense, alter, prolong, optimistic, blunt.
sheeraz
Homework Due Nov 7 Student: Sheeraz
DeleteTownSend Press 45/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 7/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Sheeraz, please remember to start sentences with capital letters. You have errors with the use of “chronologically”, “remorse”, and “pretense”. Yet the rest of the vocabulary words were used correctly. Total: 92 %
Amazon will not make you feel remorse for any items we sell! Take your chance in this Thanksgiving to buy electric blankets to make yourself comfortable and cozy. They also help your back pains, make you sleep faster and boost your mood! We sell these amples of items in good prices so take your chance because these sales price wont be prolong time. Warning: Please refrain yourself from using the electric heat all night.
ReplyDeleteWords: Refrain, Remorse, Prolong, amples
Nilima
Homework Due Nov 14 Student: Nilima
DeleteTownSend Press 45/50
Vocabulary 20/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Hey Nilima! An electric blanket sounds perfect for today’s weather! Please review your usage of the words “prolong” and “ample”. The rest were used correctly . Total: 85%
Hello amazon shoppers,
ReplyDeleteWe have an ample amount of clothing items in our stocks .our fabrics specialize on prolong lasting and durability ,they are very comforting ,
And you can also alter your oder within two days .this is the best opportunity to grab the best deals of shopping. So hurry up guys .
Words used : prolong,ample,alter
Raja
Homework Due Nov 14 Student: Raja
DeleteTownSend Press 45/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 4/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Raja, please make sure to start each sentence with a capital letter. You also need to have at least 5 sentences in your paragraph to get full points. The vocabulary words were used correctly! Total: 89 %
Hello our dear Amazon shoppers,
ReplyDeleteWe a company named "Zet" selling ample amount of mobile phones. Me, Nursultan as the director of the company trying to alter our brand to only android phones. You, our dear customers can get any mobile phone of your choice for a cheap price. We have a great news for you. When you get one Brand new Samsung A50, we giving away one MI Note 7 for free. So, hurry up, and make a quick decision.
By Nurs Zarlykov
Homework Due Nov 14 Student: Nursultan
DeleteTownSend Press 42/50
Vocabulary 20/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Nursultan, please make sure to use at least 3 of the vocabulary words and then write down at the bottom which words you used. I found “ample” and “alter” which were both used correctly! Total: 82 %
From: Manufacturer
ReplyDeleteTo: Amazon Shoppers
Hello our dear customers, I sell wooden souvenirs. They will shine at night. we ample amount of souvenirs, you can put our souvenirs in your car or at home on your room, they will shine beautifully and alter the aura in your room or car. To prolong my business for a long time, I am now doing promotions if you buy one souvenir the second for half price.
By Urmatbek Mombekov
Homework Due Nov 14 Student: Urmatbek
DeleteTownSend Press 41/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 7/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Urmatbek, please make sure to write at least 5 sentences, start each sentence with a capital letter, and tell me at the bottom which 3 vocabulary words you chose. I found “prolong”, “ample” and “alter”. All were used correctly! Total:88 %
Dear Amazon customer,
ReplyDeleteAre you tired of spending lots of time moving your groceries from your garage or outside your house to inside? I can introduce to you a product which will alter your life and refrain you from being tired of carrying groceries. Most amazon customer are interested of purchasing home chart and feeling very happy and optimistic after using the product and always recommend other to purchase.
Wish you all the best,
Shaza Saker
(Words used: alter, refrain and optimistic)
Homework Due Nov 14 Student: Shaza
DeleteTownSend Press 46/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 6/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Shaza, please make sure to write at least 5 sentences next time. You used all 3 vocabulary words correctly! Total: 92 %
Dear Amazon Customer,
ReplyDeleteI would like to introduce the best product ever seen before, It pretenses to be your alter when you sub-merge in the exercise world, an active cream that would help to born more calories while you are doing your normal routine, we know that sometimes we do not have time enough time for exercise now its time to be optimistic and use this revolutionary item.
words used- pretense, optimistic, sub-merge, alter.
Santiago Ospina
Homework Due Nov 14 Student: Santi
DeleteTownSend Press 41/50
Vocabulary 20/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 2/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Santiago: A sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a period. I only see ONE period in your entire paragraph. This means you only wrote one sentence with lots of run-on errors. Please stop doing this! You also did not use “pretense” and “alter” correctly. Total: 73 %
Hello customers, I’m introducing a new clothing detergent in a few days. It is going to be a 400ml pack which i believe an ample size, considering the price of $12.
ReplyDeleteI’m so optimist that people are going to love the results. Customers won’t remorse after buying it. Customers can use the product in chronological order with other cloth detergent products for better results.
Words used: ample, optimist, chronological, remorse.
By eman.
DeleteHomework Due Nov 7 Student: Eman
DeleteTownSend Press 43/50
Vocabulary 20/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 8/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Eman, please be careful to write at least 5 sentences. You also need to remember that the subject “I” should always be capitalized. “Chronological” and “remorse” were not used correctly, but the rest of the vocabulary words were okay. Total: 81 %
AnonymousNovember 13, 2022 at 1:52 PM (An apology professor by mistake I have posted it on the wrong day November 7th, I am sending it again on the correct page).
ReplyDeleteHello shoppers, for this occasion, I bring to you for sale the wonderful stain remover soap for clothes. It can be used for any type of clothing, white or colored, without altering the colors and prolonging its life; with its activated carbon, you can remove even the most difficult stains. Just use the measuring spoon and put it in the washing machine on a normal wash cycle, and when you finish, you will see the best results in your clothes.
Note: Refrain from using bleach.
Words: Altering, prolonging ,refrain.
Alejandro
Homework Due Nov 7 Student: Alejandro
DeleteTownSend Press 42/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 6/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Alejandro, please make sure to write at least 5 complete sentences next time. You used all 3 vocabulary words correctly! Total: 88 %
Homework Due Nov 7 Student: Riya
ReplyDeleteTownSend Press 49/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ Sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Thanks for your work Riya! The only error is with the word “remorse”. It can only be used as a noun. Total: 99%